Write a story that includes the following: Snowstorm, coffee, jellyfish, submarine and Darrell9/29/2020
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Cassius
9/29/2020 11:32:58 am
Once there was a man named Darrell who was flying his submarine in a snowstorm. After the snowstorm was over a jellyfish crashed into Darrel's submarine and spilled his coffee all over him
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Chloe
9/29/2020 11:37:33 am
One day in the middle of the snowstorm, a person named Darrell was driving a submarine. he was enjoying coffee with Merrick the Australian tourist. Merrick wanted a turn driving the submarine so Darrell let him. Merrick immediately found a whale and started chasing it.
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Dashawn
9/29/2020 11:42:06 am
nice story Chloe
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marilyn
9/29/2020 11:38:39 am
i dont know what to write i can rite about a guy named Darrel that lives in Alaska who got cought in a snow storm or a Coffee filled jelly fish candy i dont know i just have to rite something maybe ill rite about a Sumerian
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Chloe
9/29/2020 11:55:32 am
Don't forget to capitalize and double check your spelling.
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Dashawn
9/29/2020 11:40:48 am
A Bigfoot named Darrell always wanted to to get attention so he was the first Bigfoot to ever drive a submarine in a snow storm. He always brought his coffee and his pet jelly fish.
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Chloe
9/29/2020 11:54:34 am
good story
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MARSLADE
9/29/2020 11:42:57 am
Jake from State Farms was talking to Darrell with Lemu Emu and Doug. Progressive was in a Submarine with a jelly fish. Coffee was all over the ocean.
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CALEB STARKWEATHER ( * O * )
9/29/2020 11:43:56 am
One time there was a jellyfish named Darrell. He lived in the Arctic by himself. He has three friends that he from rock. He named them rock 1, rock 2, and rock 3. One day him and his friends were exploring (because Darrell was an adventurer who explored the ocean) and he found a sunken submarine he went inside and saw the skeletons of the people who were aboard then he saw some very old coffee and some pictures of snow storms ten he said this is a great place. I am going to stay here.
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Chloe
9/29/2020 12:25:57 pm
I would suggest reading your story out loud, parts of it didn't make sense to me.
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aiden
9/29/2020 12:44:14 pm
one day there was a snowstorm while me and some of my friends were at my house. we were all playing a role-play that was kinda like murder mystery. but when i was walking down the hall drinking my coffee things got real i saw someone in the corner of one of the rooms and they were dead. i didn't know what to do so i ran around getting everybody into the living room ( me Merrick Cassius DJ Keegan Jaiden and Darrell) and told them that i found someone dead in one of the bedrooms. Since we were playing a role-play they didn't believe me but when i told them to follow me they all saw it and instantly left. "This was serious" i told my pet jellyfish "i need to escape this house..but how"then Cassius came up to me and told me he found a submarine in my secret pool i was confused at first but then i got really happy because i could escape and not get killed but then when Cassius left i heard a thump and i turnd around and he was dead! THE END. for now
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